I’m making a demo for a game, and I need to get to work finalizing the demo’s script. It’s a comedic, story-driven 2D platformer.
The script is pretty big, and I’d like for someone to look over a new revision of it and give me feedback (particularly this time on the comedy). The game is also pretty weird.
Would you like to read through a 130-page script and try to refine the writing and jokes?