Hellooo! Not sure if you'll see this but I love your game! So far I've only really played the Violet Dom path (with Cafe Corruption) but am going to explore the other paths too! The sex scenes are great, the dialogue is great and it's really fun given that the main goal is just to get through school. That being said I think there's some feedback I have to make the game better 😅:
- Incomplete renders:
- Club22 -- We have the render for the first strip dance but none after. We also don't have the bouncer handjob scene. Lastly we don't have the renders for the orgy (?) with cherry.
- Karaoke Bar -- You have renders for Jun and friends but we see blue placeholders. Why not put the actual people in because it takes away from the immersion. Also a reader for the scene with the guy and Jun saving you would be great.
- Secondary Characters -- You have made character art for the secondary characters cause we see them in the art, but when we talk to them we see placeholder images or don't see them at all (Jun, Cherry, Construction Drunks, Farmers Market Grannies, Joy, Violet's Parents). They could potentially have character portraits show up on screen similar to our main LI's during their scenes.
- Additional note: There are some sex scenes with placeholders in the scene which just breaks immersion (The couple from the bar, bar prostitution scene)
- Add nude sprites for characters in their portraits in relevant scenes (ofc I'm referring to Violet lol)
- The violet scene at the theatre was just pitch black for me. Is it supposed to be like that?
- All cutscenes have MC in default clothes. That reduces the excitement about buying new outfits.
- Map: Visited locations should show up on the map to increase its usefulness and reduce the randomness of "Walk Around". Club 22 could be the building close to the bar. The Karaoke Bar could be the building next to the school. The record store could be within the mall. Oh and speaking of which you could add a new store, "Electronics/Machines" (?) that sells a record player, video game console, headphones, a new phone (just if you want to give the player a different option for the phone layout). And another new store for lingerie and sex toys (like I said on the violet dom route 😂) 😃. You could also add a beach option cause the map is designed that way (and it comes up during the Cheer Squad trip)
- Kinda extracting from the previous point but adding new systems to make all those places more relevant even after the mini stories are complete:
- Stress system: High stress leads to slipping grades, but listening to music (record player and records), karaoke nights (maybe with friends too), playing games, beach trip or walk around reduce stress. Stress goes up when you don't have fun and keep doing HW or have unpleasant exchanges during walk around events (dangerous alley, matt + alex scene, their steals stuff (this is bar but you get the point)).
- Kink system: Just a list keeping track of what your kinks are. Not played it but ik there's pet play on matt route, cuck on Damien, S/M & toys on violet (this I played lol). There could also be voyeurism because of the construction guys. Again just keeping track of kinks that you accept and reject.
- Contacts update after every "exchanged phone # dialogues".
- Violet: Make all choices with violet matter to sub/dom. I noticed that only the spa choices matter when it comes to whether Violet will be a sub or dom. Make choices during the cafe date matter too to make it seem more realistic and have more buildup
- Backgrounds
- There's no park background during the scene with construction workers
- Maybe a different background for different cafes (cause the violet cafe was different but the bg was the same if I'm not wrong)
- There's no theatre background during the scene with Violet.
- There's no arcade background with alice and samantha
- Living room:
- Maybe add a picture of MC with her parents in the living room to make it more personal.
- Following the same pattern the LI that MC is romancing could have a picture in the living room.
- From the previous point of console & record player, they could be here.
Well that's the end of my long long feedback lol. Regardless I think I should end with some more praise: The dreams are really really well made. I would've appreciated renders for those too but the bg you have on suggests that it's not happening which is fine! Cause they get me aroused wither way :). The sex scene themselves are really good too and dialogue in general is superb. And IMO theses changes just enhance an already great game!
If you do read this have a FANTASTIC day!!!
PS: I'm on Mac and I have also seen the misaligned sandal on the flirt outfit like NetherBone mentioned.