i've noticed that songs that use the sgm soundfont tend to either be really good or really bad, and man, this one is really really good. i think you really hit the mark with what you were going for here. it really feels like a melancholic credits theme.
"it's over. after way too much pain and suffering, its actually over, and you're still here to tell the tale. now you can sit by a cliffside, watching the sunset as the evening breeze blows by and wonder how it got to this."