Very nice contrast between all the piece, I really like the first one its very primal I think you nailed what I had in mind for this one. The transitions are also well done it feels like it makes sense I like the voice, I think the strings are great but sometimes its missing a little something, you can probably add some stuff with woodwinds or just a voice in the strings and create an ostinato or something to mix things up a bit. well done man !