Wow...Just WOW. Not sure if you realized that you pretty much wrote a Theatrical Play or Opera. This could also be a story narrated to children/babies. My Criticism is for more lore, on these Shibinito and InTras'Tes tribe. The story reminds me of the Persian or Roman empire. Nice work
"Shibinito Face InTras'tes" is reminiscent of patapon.
InTras'Tes Invade Kentyans, love the rhythm but hate the flute. It sounds like a cheap imitation made with sforzando. which would alright for me if i didn't view it as a flute or woodwind. its something about it sounds like a robotic recording triggered by midi. Maybe more variation in the vibrato? but i digress. I apologize, trying to be rude, love the song after flute part.
My favorite was Times of Peace. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave your feedback!
Rude? No, not at all! All feedback is good feedback, I want to grow as much as I can
I have yet to listen to it (ridiculous I know) and honestly now I'm just going to listen after I rated ail the entries (like4/5 last, no biggie) but I know what flute you are talking about, and I agree, was not very happy with the VST sound already when composing, but you know, not much time xD
Take care :3