It’s promising! I’m definitely looking forward to the full release.
Quick thing I noticed, pressing Q will open the ESC menu but you can still move around.
I know this is just the demo, but I think some customers should definitely walk to the chairs and the bathroom, which I’m sure will be in the final game. You should be able to mess up their orders and have a custom text there, or for the customer to maybe get mad and pay you less.
Writing wise it was fine so far, though I did expect the guy to be more pushy when refusing him lol