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seems as though the dialogue has been a known issue for at least a year or longer but its still absurdly bad and makes the game difficult to get through, the story set-up seems fantastic and i want to be interested but the text   sooooo much of...all...the....dialogue...appears...with...ellipses...in...every...sentence... so if you're a fast reader it feels pretty miserable to click through

not to mention almost EVERY character starts out as an absolutely unbearable c*nt and it feels extremely forced and unnatural while the MC seems like this pushover p*ssy

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I paid someone to fix the English in 0.1, but that doesn’t change the fact that the dialogue might still be bad. From 0.2 onward, things have improved, including a lot of other stuff. I’m aware of the issue, but unfortunately, I’m not working on the project full-time, so I can’t just drop creating new content to improve what was done before, even though I really want to.

The characters are intentionally made to be off-putting at first because there’s a reason for that. If you don’t like the MC, I get it—that’s just a matter of personal taste, like everything else.

As for the ellipses, you’re absolutely right. There are way fewer of them in the new patches, but ideally, I should go back and fix that in 0.1 as well.

The game isn’t for everyone, but I’m trying to listen and improve it.

Thanks for your feedback.

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If you acknowledge things are bad it may be worthwhile to remake it since it is making you lose players (I assume). It's also early in the game so there's less to be remade. Think about it, ask your supporters.

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That would be too drastic. I appreciate everyone who pushed through the first steps in the game and stuck with me. The text improvements in version 0.1 will happen gradually.