I feel as if I've barely even begun to scratch the surface, unravel the outermost spirals of this one. It's absolutely packed with rich writing accentuated by its soundscapes and visuals. I must admit I don't have a hypnokink at all, which makes it maybe a bit ironic that the first SJam i entered is themed around it, but I do appreciate a good effort! And this is a phenomenal effort. Even where the kink aspects didn't lure my into the headspace, the writing was so solid and the atmosphere so sold that I wanted to keep playing it anyway. And in a sense, I suppose that's a sort of hypnosis in its own right ;)
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getting feedback from people without hypnosis kinks is so goddamn cool you have no idea
it's genuinely one of the first times anyone outside the community's looked at my work, and that gives a bat all the warm fuzzies ^w^
thank you for your kind words. i had no idea it was your first game jam too -- now i'm even more proud to have supported a fellow twine enthusiast first-timer ^w^