The story doesn't stop being a horror story just because you personally didn't like it, and there are many classic horror stories which are far longer and even more descriptive than Lonely is. Just look at Dracula.
Yeah I know it's supposed to be a horror story but it kind of fails at it. I mean first of all, all three of the stories are exactly the same look at it. first you run away from that emo girl and you get somewhere, then you meet some shady girl, you spend the night somewhere, you do some bonding, then you get killed because reason. This game had lots of potential and one if it's issues is not enough blood for example, the vampire ending, the worst we get is her closing her mouth in on out neck and just that. the story describes her biting us but the image shows otherwise. Another thing the game could do is include a jump scare. not once during the story do I feel fear. Maybe it's because i'm desensitized but I doubt that. Again the game is under the Horror genre. If it wants to be there it needs to make me scared. also I just realized that you're the creator of this game so you should take my advice.
The game looks nice and pretty but that's it. This game was... hard to enjoy to say the least. When I beat it I felt like I wasted an hour of my time.
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