This was fun! I like where this is going. I think just an early suggestion would be to ramp up the different in linguistic tone for a character like Percival even more. When it was mentioned that Percival would be speaking strangely, and everyone else kind of had similar (proper) vocab, it didn't hit as hard. Maybe feel free to soften the casual style of everyone else's dialogue to make his feel extra weird? That, or choose a different style of speaking? Either way, I'm excited to see what happens in Chivalry Class! Not bad so far. - TA Janine