Great job so far! You've put a TON of detail into this game and I really liked how the excitement stayed strong through the many many loops! I think some of the options felt a bit on the straightforward side, and more outcomes could have been built in, but with how much detail you've included already, I'm greatly impressed by where this story went. The only suggestion I could make is to watch out for certain tricky details being shared in incorrect responses, like at one point where I told a certain character that I'd be going to the lab, and they responded as if I were going home. With so much detail to keep track of, I wonder if you could strengthen the detail in earlier loops by not making the player go through so many? Either way, great job! - TA Janine