Yes, in the case of Nanoreno, I think we’ll be less afraid to take the time to explain certain elements in more detail while still keeping a dynamic pace!
Yes, it’s a good idea to make two versions, even though I think the Nanoreno version will be the final one, as I prefer having a deeper story—just like you do as well.
Thank you, that’s really kind of you to offer to give feedback again! But please don’t feel obligated at all, what you’ve already done is already incredibly generous.😊