I Have made a game review on this game i hope you enjoy my the video
Your criticism is well said. I do agree that my game fell flat in terms of story and details because I am busy at school, but it is not an excuse for the faults of this game. I will take note of all the things that you said in this video to help improve my games in the future. If you wouldn't mind, you can follow me so you won't miss any future games that I will develop.