I feel ashamed of calling my game "Lynchian" compared to this one, which I feel perfectly captures that tone. I sense an influence from Lost Highway?
The writing is so clean yet evocative, my favorite piece of text being the note about the mirror (Best note in any game hands down).
This game is my ideal level of scary; the horror serves the narrative and vice versa, it doesn't feel gratuitous at any point. However more compelling about this game is the overwhelming sense of loneliness and malaise the designer has created through a combination of tone, music, writing and atmosphere.
My one criticism is the visuals leave something to be desired, but even then it didn't distract me, besides; I imagine this is just a stepping stone to future efforts which makes me incredibly excited for future projects.