Interesting detective story!

• Innovation – It's like a visual novel that you could do on your phone, that's pretty cool.
• Fun – It is a lot of reading, but was still pretty interesting.
• Graphics – The UI is clear and simple.  Some graphics with the text would be nice and help keep peoples attention.
• Audio – More sounds would be good, like UI clicks, and sounds for the story.
• Polish – More sounds and visuals would help it feel more like a game~

Great job on the game!  Please check out my game if you like Metroidvanias or platformers :D