Thanks for the feedback. This is just a demo that i'm mainly using to test the engine i'm building for it so the story is not very well thought out and the main active elements like the puzzles are just forced into it for testing purposes. "Elisa Has The Inventory Skill" which is the main project i'm working on using my engine has more thought put into the story and other activity elements.
I Appreciate the feedback, ill make sure to implement them into the new novel!