i really like the idea of the game, and the story was really fun :D
i LOVED the ending ;)
a suggestion: maybe changing the cursor to another would be prefect because it blends with the background and makes it harder to aim!
maybe change the short music loops for longer ones because it is a bit annoying.
Overall it is a great game!! :)
we would love you to check out our game, and give us a rate :)