Thanks for playing. This idea to continue from jam to jam with the same story is a way to hone both my storytelling and game design instincts inside the high speed structure of the time limit. I don't have a planned story in advance, and i didn't think of it at all until this game jam started. So i'm definitely interested in hearing players' thoughts about what isn't working and why, so I can learn as much as possible from each chapter. That's what's important to me here, so I really appreciate the time you took to give feedback, especially when there are thousands of games to be tried out. Cheers.