I like the idea of the game a lot. I think what was missing for me was something additional to make up for the loss of my vision of the character. Maybe making it only 2 maps but slightly bigger with checkpoints (where u are visible) would've made it a bit more appealing but then again it doesn't play into the story... you surely came up with something that's hard to work with but you made something out of it regardless!
I like that you did your own voice-acting, I'm fangirling over the voice of X I think haha