ACTUAL REVIEW INCOMING (Not so serious, but I'll try to give some actual criticism), no spoilers.
In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new.
This game has something unique, it really makes you want to keep reading and watching the stunning visuals. I'd say that for being your first game, this is already one of the top VNs there are.
Some of the good things I can point of your story is the amazing setting. Many of the VNs I have played are usually set in the US, which gets boring really fast. Also, the story pacing is great, we get to discover new key points to the story, and yet it leaves you to wonder what's going to happen next, I'd say that this is one of the most attractive things about this VN, it really kept me invested in the story from the first moment. The characters are also really well done, each one has a unique background story which makes them more believable. And I will take this opportunity to comment about the most controversial character, which happens to be a prostitute, and I'm just going to say that whoever thinks that this could potentially ruin their experience is missing on a very good story, sometimes you gotta give your characters a harsh story to make them feel alive, if every girl is just suddenly attracted to the MC it becomes boring, so I'd say this is very brave from KS.
On the negative things about this VN, I want to point that having too many characters show up on one update can be a double edged sword, in my personal opinion, it would be better to make each update centered on 2-3 characters, instead of giving every character little time on screen. And something I wanted to point out is the lack of a visual effect for the flashbacks, I think it would be nice to add some color effect to the flashbacks to make them feel more 'nostalgic' or something, idk, I'm not a game developer lol.
Anyways, that's my honest review of this game, I think that you're cooking with this story, and I'm looking forward to the next updates. 🤵🍷
Oh, and also, Miharu best girl no doubt.
