https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3349794 first game jam monkeys
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This is a cute little game! It has a strong foundation when it comes to the gameplay loop and has room for improvement. For this being your first game jam, this is a good game. As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:
- The strongest points about the game are the visuals and the story. Having a unique character like a monkey is a great unique factor for your game. The visuals were also consistent.
- The level design were okay, but I wish there was more "space" in the game, to jump around and "feel" like a monkey. This would also give some chance for the player to be able to dodge bullets as well.
- I really want you to focus on sound effects! For the first game, it's okay. But sound effects are extremely important. Having sounds play when you jump, shoot, or do anything in the game, really adds life to the whole game. I would also love to hear some monkey sounds here and there.
- I would also recommend shortening the intro cutscene, or add the ability to fast-forward through it, as a lot of players like myself, don't have high attention-span. We want them to start playing the game as soon as possible.
- Consider adding in-game tutorials. This will help people learn more about the game, from the game itself. Not a lot of people read the full game page.
Overall, it's a solid start. I would recommend you to continue making games and keep having fun with your ideas.
By the way, here is game! It would be great if you could play, rate, and give feedback on it! Thanks!