I enjoyed the experience so far, even though it was short-lived. Would love for it to be better, given time and resources. As promised, here are things that I loved about the game, and things I would love to see improved:
- The best part of the game, is the learning curve. You started off like a basic tutorial for the player to follow. It's a solid start especially once the game gets bigger, this will pay off.
- The visuals look great, although to me, it seemed inconsistent. The bright areas were really bright, and the dark areas (like inside the vents, could actually be a little bit brighter, just barely, to see the details of the vent) This is just personal opinion, maybe it's my monitor, and you might need to introduce an option to adjust the brightness in the settings.
- Would love if you added mystery elements to this place. The game "looks" nice. But I would love for it to make me think "What has happened in this place?". There's big potential for you to add curiosity elements, that would also add to a solid story.
- Sounds we good too, although I would love to hear more, especially when we are inside the vents, maybe a little bit of camera noise.
- The mechanics were simple, although it's a good start. I would consider spending some time brainstorming to come up with something that is unique. You can also do something that already exists and add a twist to it. There are a lot of first person games out there, and I really want your game to stand out, and be more memorable.
- I would also consider playing around with the materials to add outlines to interactable objects when we are close enough and we look at them. This will help people distinguish what interactable objects are. If you prefer it to be realistic, you can actually have it an option in the settings menu called Hints or something.
- I would of course, love to see more of the story, some dialogues, and more stealth and distraction mechanics.
Considering the game was made by just one person, and it looks quite well put together, you should be proud of what you've done. There's a big potential in this game, and I want you to continue working on it. All the best. 😊