Thank you! Yes , i want to work on it a bit more! The reaction time of the npc may be a bit too long haha they start out with a ? and end up with a ! before the room restarts, but i was worried it was going to be too hard, so i changed it so much that it is more of a walking sim now hahahaha. Which parts would you like to especially see worked on more? Also thank you for the feedback!! :D
I think it would be great if maybe different NPCs had different patterns/quirks. Like, maybe some are faster, or have a wider range of vision. Maybe some have different reactions, like calling the police, alerting others in the room, or trying to take you down themselves. Maybe you can add multiple levels after the one that currently there that progress the story more and have similar mechanics. Maybe include more mechanics as the player progresses. I would love to see the story expanded more! Of course, only if you want to. That's just my two cents.