Post by Jaded John in Chapter I Act I Released! comments

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Feel like I'm being called out here, heh. Thanks for the update y'all, glad to take a good and proper look at what's available.

Jaded John5 days ago (3 edits) (+2)

Pretty damn good so far, love the feel of the worldbuilding and the dialogue, plus the art's among the best I've seen on Itch. There's several grammatical errors I noticed sprinkled throughout, but other than that I can't really find much to fault thus far. You've got a rock solid foundation here, I'll be keeping a close eye on everything to come from here on out.

Emperor's Revenge5 days ago(+1)

Hey, thanks for the feedback!

I'll make sure to run a thorough review of the script to iron out those typos before our next update.

I'm wondering if the grammatical errors you've noticed come from Sasha, because those are intentional. If that's the case, I'll also have to work on driving that point home in the future.

Jaded John4 days ago

I'd have to do a second playthrough to find them again, but I'm willing to do some proofreading if you'd like. Sasha's dialogue was fine from what I can remember, it was mostly minor stuff like the odd misspelling and some sentence's structuring.

Emperor's Revenge4 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

That would be very helpful

I'll create a new channel on Discord, where you can send anything you find odd.

Jaded John3 days ago(+1)

Just finished the proofreading, took a bit longer than expected due to a change in my schedule today. Details on the tab you set up on Discord.

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