I'd have to do a second playthrough to find them again, but I'm willing to do some proofreading if you'd like. Sasha's dialogue was fine from what I can remember, it was mostly minor stuff like the odd misspelling and some sentence's structuring.
That would be very helpful
I'll create a new channel on Discord, where you can send anything you find odd.
Just finished the proofreading, took a bit longer than expected due to a change in my schedule today. Details on the tab you set up on Discord.