First of all, I need to say that I am really not the target audience for this game and I've never played games like this before. Therefore, I feel that I am not the best person to judge this game. Take that into account when reading this ;)
I didn't have access to my computer today and tried playing the game on mobile, fully expecting it to not work. But the game ran perfectly, so that's great!
I think the game can really benefit from more polish. I noticed many spelling mistakes, in the 'Sunny' menu the close option falls outside of the black box, and (not sure if this is a mobile thing) the choices on the screen block you from checking stats/items. I also think adding double quotes to lines that are conversation would be a nice addition.
Gameplay wise, I have a few things that were unclear to me. The first time playing, I could not find out how to actually talk to Allura. I only realized when restarting that, in the opening dialogue, Allura tells you to meet her in the garden at noon. I think some type for reminder of this would be really helpful.
I didn't really understand what the requirements are / how many points you need for levelling up your skills.
I like the random events that happen where Sunny sees something and can react in different ways, but they did feel too similar. More variety here would be really nice.
I think character portraits for the characters, even crude ones, would add a lot to the experience.
I hope this doesn't come off as negative. Because this isn't my type of game, it is difficult for me to appreciate the good, and therefore my focus is on points of improvement. I can see this game has a lot of personality and charm, and I hope you keep improving on it!