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Woo! El-protag! Woo! Slimes! Heh, slightly reminds me of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_World,_My_Way_(video_game)

Pretty opening screen and good opening question! Lol tiny text. gonna try the other option to see what happens! No difference! Heh! Ooh, history! ... Maybe somehow put a note saying "hold confirm to speedup text"? Good thing I tried!

Fun narrator name!

dowloaded > downloaded

Also the "skip" should explain what I'm skipping?

Lol closet. Taking diary should probably remove it? And can't use it immediately. hmm.

Bath: saturday > Saturday

Gosh, so many fun descriptions, more motivation to make that trope. https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/article_history.php?article=Administrivia.TropeIdeaS...

Congrats on being ~35th top rated, but 2nd most popular right now in the Slime tag!

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Oskar8128 days ago(+1)

Thank you very much for your message! It's hard to see some mistakes, especially when they're barely noticeable, I'll take note of what you said and fix the problems as soon as possible! ^-^)b

Malandy28 days ago (19 edits)

Umm... There seems to be a lotta spelling issues, but at least everything's readable!

I will need equipament > I will need equipment

Sr. Smith: Slime aren't dangerus > Sr. Smith: Slimes aren't dangerous

Heh, Sra. Smith being glad! ... After, I think "receive" was spelt wrong...

Empty. Bottle: Can storage strange liquids > Empty Bottle: Can store strange liquids

Daggar > Dagger

Lol funny first quest! Woo! Seeing 3 of the 5 screenshots!

Good reason to avoid Aura! And can't go back after reverting! hehe! Ooh, Slime Jelly and regular jelly are different!

Ooh! Cool! Redrawing a regular RTP monster in your own style! ... Bil > Bill ... Woah, color change! And heh status change! Banner image makes sense now too! Slime-based biomorphing! Reminds me of https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33491/slime-girl

Heh, deliveries. Jelly Belly Elly puns! Woo! Uh, probably shouldn't sleep face down, probably would be better face up? / back down? Ooh, yep, color is intentional! Aww! Speech! Woah, terrifying / scary backstory! Cheery music. heh. Also Orange is now a status effect! Woo! Glad I checked the cake! And looking back at save 1, cool! It changes! ... Okay, probably bombarded you with enough questions. Maybe I'll join the Discord for all this indepth stuff instead!

Actually, maybe after people start chatting in there tomorrow. Lacto Chapel bottom left: Workshiper > Worshipper? Lol Lacto. ... Then again, could get Mother of a Thousand Young creepy. Probably not. ... Oh, I just saw Lacto. I thought it was just background art! Ha!

Holy shit, it's been, what, less than a day, and the Carn Slime already got to the capital maybe? It moves FAST!

Yay! I can pacifist until Big Blue! Now at level Goo!

Spoilers so putting this low... And padding out the space needed with typo checks.

After eating all that Jelly, I'm not sure if Elly's shirt should be blue or the more purply in the itch.io screenshot.

When's the earliest impact of the censorship option? I'm trying both versions to see what changes, and I'm losing track of which file is which.