This really is a strange one. I seldom play graphical novels, so I am in no position to criticise any of these, but I think the story is pretty wild yet interesting. I am a bit lost somewhere in the early middle of the story, but luckily starting to understand it more before the end. I'd say the writing needs a bit more work and fine-tuning (also probably tone down the profanity a bit? It gets old quite quickly), but generally, it's a fun read. The choices are interesting too as there doesn't seem to have a "right" answer at all. The art is trippy at times, and I don't really have time to admire it, I am just too busy reading at that point.
But other than that, this is quite a unique entry to the jam indeed! Keep up the good work!