Just played most of your content, and it looks good to me. Ill be keeping an eye out for this. i already liked on steam Greenlight. I hope it gets approved, i will buy it.
I did notice one thing, though it may just be because i'm running a 4k rig and the game doesn't support the upscale, but there's a line that splits the screen when moving through Mays room. But, this is only when scrolling through the room. i will try and downscale my resolution and see if that solves the issue.
Also, Autumns animation seemed less fluid compared to May and Arlene. Otherwise the animations are great.
Don't give up this project!
Tried Down-Scaling and it did not solve the issue of the line while proving the screen in Mays room.