Love the story, the humor and the concept of the game. Some things i would point out is the gap between platforms can be too precise even at the start. Might want to make them closer a bit to make it easier to the player to get a hang of it. And another would be the checkpoint sometimes can be too close to an obstacle that i keep dying and respawning multiple times before i stop pressing the movement button.
Overall this is wonderful funny game. Great work!