Wow this is such a cool concept! Played your other project page and just wow. The storytelling here is awesome. I really liked the visual narrative and the artwork is amazing! Good music that goes well with the theme of your game. I think my only bit of feedback is some of the detection triggers just a little close together, but small gripe and that triggering more dialogue doesn't allow me to just skip or hit back if I've read it already.
Cool concept and story. Well done.