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I took a quick look, and I already know it isn't worth replying there. I'll give you a single example as to why:

Quoting the user: "Hmmm... Well, for starters, the overview says, "In Valenza Family, you step into the shoes of Michael Valenza, a cunning and often ruthless made man...". If the protagonist's last name is Valenza, then he would be a family member, not a made man. If the protagonist is a made man, then his last name would be anything except Valenza. Just thought the author might like to know."

And now I'll tell you my answer to that - 

If a Don of an Italian Mafia family promotes his son or daughter without them properly earning their place, several key issues and potential consequences could arise within the organization. Mafia families operate on a system of earned respect and loyalty. Promoting someone without them proving their worth can lead to resentment among soldiers and capos who have worked their way up. It may be seen as a violation of the code of meritocracy that ensures survival and loyalty within the organization. And this is just cherry from the top. There are numerous factors here that speak heavily against this approach. And this is just me being nice and not writing a whole factual book on it.

Moral of the story here? Being smart is fine. But trying to be smart for sake of being smart is not, if it turns out that what you said is dumb.