The plot is kinda already ntr, even if what you say about Charlie or any other males not touching any of the lis now or in the future is true.
1. Fetish or not, he blackmails the girl the mc was in love and forces her into marriage. There is already a clear steal here to a love interest, that is basically netorare. Ofc it will be worse if he touched, had sex with her, etc (you replied to me saying he won't touch any of the lis... this is a hard sell hard to believe, considering the marriage.)
2.Strategic or not doesn't matter, the mc is sending him a girl that is in love with him. Also tells one of the lis that he won't care what happens to her... Charlie says he will use her and turn her agains him instead, there is implications that will feel ntr to the player, (Again, if what you replied to me saying that no one will touch any of the girls is true, this at least can give it to you and say is not ntr... though it still gives those vibes after what both Charlie and the mc said about her.)
3.Irrelevant to the point at hand.
Btw, the whole devlog you did doesn't still address those points.
1. "Cuckoldry", like I said before, the villain in this case "Charlie" already did steal the li of the mc and forced her to marry him, that will feel like cuckoldry to the players and ntr no matter what, even if he never touched her. "Humiliation" is what the player may feel after that happened and was also put into jail.
2. This sound like you are planning for things to happen to the "girls" despite what you said before... just what kind of consequences & struggles you mean? maybe you just are bad at explaining lol. May I have you remember what you said about "Humiliation" again? fetish or not, the way you narrate and make the characters, or the players in this case like a powerless beta can still inflict those feelings despite not being "fetishes".
3 & 4, remaining points. I usually never do this but will invite you to our discord, https://discord.gg/MPTWhE9X3h though make sure to reply to this post here since it will serve other people as information in the future. We can address further points there after.
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So you are saying Charlies won't touch the girl that the mc did send to him? You are saying the girl that was in love with the mc and Charlie did steal from him through blackmail has done nothing with him, not even a kiss before or after they married?
Lets say I believe you, and nothing happened to her and nothing will happen to the girl that was send to him... just the way you made the game gives those vibes to the players, just the whole "steal" of the girl through blackmail was already ntr (and he even forces her to marry him, so thats a double down), whether you like it or not.
you say no ntr / sharing yet the game smell like cuck shit a mile away with charlie saying he is gonna use the girl the mc send..... so let me be clear here, are any of the girls the mc fucks or the lis fucked by someone else other than the mc? because that is basically ntr, and it doesn't matter if you say the girl the mc sends to him is not a "li".
Also it may already be ntr if he is fucking the girl the mc was in love with, since she married him, even if through blackmail...
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big fucking pass then if this game is gonna have ntr, and just to be clear what this fetish does mean-->
NTR (netorare/netorase) = Any love interest (girls the mc can romance) having sex with someone else than the MC is ntr.
I know some cucks says otherwise (like the mods on f95, or a few in that site) but that is basically what you have to avoid, if the mc will be the only one having sex with the girls, then that will be fine.
You should be clear about this, because it being "avoidable" is still the same crap content.
Is because many devs have shit like "I used to have lots of sex when I was in college" or such crap cuck tmi's (too much information) dialogue shit when talking to mc or someone else in the vn.
But good to know, as for netori ( fucking someone else's wives, that is fine for us so long the wifes aint fucking their husbands anymore. We ain't want sloppy seconds.)
That's why I asked you before too, Anyways, good luck.
I won't trust a cuck to proof-read even if he was the last dude on the planet doing that. And speaking of cucks, what are the tags for this game, are the Li's only fucked by the mc, are they virgins? or will they fuck someone else besides the mc...
(And just to be clear here, even if it is only mentioned in text, it is still crap)
This is very important info that many of us need to know.
you say no ntr, but many devs have a blind delusion of what that means, so let me ask you, will any of those lis get fucked by someone else than the mc (be it in text or otherwise) or those lis only will ever be with the mc or no one (meaning that even if the mc don't pursue a li, she will never be mentioned or shown with someone else ever).
You said there won't be any ntr or sharing in the game, so will all the li's only be fucked by the mc?
or for you the girls can fuck others so long they aren't in a relationship with the mc, can you explain what you understand by "ntr" ?
what about the girls that are married, do they still have sex with their husband or has been sexless for a long time. Will any of those have sex with their husband now or in the future?.
so the mc will be raising a kid that is not his? It doesn't matter if her partner is gone, thats pretty much what cucks do... They raise the kids from someone else, guess the game is a pass for me, unless it was the mc that preg her or she was some side chick that won't appear at all in the story... Big pass if she is a li.
I think you missed his point in your wall of text, what he wants to know and most of us players want to know is.....
are the lis (love interest) fucked only by the mc, meaning no other man or woman will fuck them....... or they will be fucking some other person besides the mc.... because for most of us that is netorare, and it doesn't matter what context you use; be it cuckold, sharing, swinging, rape, or whatever other fetishes that implies a li having sex with someone else that is not the mc, also it doesn't matter if it is not shown, so long is hinted in text or any other way, it will still be something no vanilla players want.
I hope this helps you know what kind of info players want to know, because avoidable or not, that doesn't exactly help since the content will still be there. And spare me the "I don't know what kind of fetishes my game will have"
because you must know what kind of content you don't want.
well, the whole scene was kinda ntr-ish vibes and cuck if the mc chooses that.... I hate optional ntr as much as full ntr games.
The whole mc thinking was suggesting such scene too unless using the power to make him a eunuch...
will give you the benefit of the doubt and remove my rating of the game, though I don't buy that at all, since you could have changed the text to sound less like the game was going to have such content.
Explain the stacy thing then, the mc is clear about it and the tag is too, why are you trying to hide that?
that content is in the game, the mc says "Allow him to make a pass on Stacy" with the choice "I don't care what happens to her" that casually has the variable stacy_ntr = 1
or "make sure he doesn't" and then the mc uses his power to influence him to not have any sexual desire.... and the variable stacy_ntr = 0 stays at 0 , deactivated.
That you don't find that as cuck content makes me laugh, she is a li and a love interest that is basically created for the mc / players so her fucking some npc is basically cucking the player / mc, doesn't matter shit if they are in a relationship.
Perhaps you cuck-brained people can't accept that fact and just want to live in your world of delusions.......
And for once I agree, is pointless to try to reason with a cuck like you.
shown or not, if they (landlord and landlady) have sex off-screen, is the same thing.
You should consider sexless marriage, there are many ways you can go about it,
the landlord can have a lover, not be interested in the landlady anymore etc... many ways that don't imply a LI having sex or be involved with someone else that is not the mc.
When a li has sex with someone else who is not the mc is considered ntr to most of us, whether it is shown or not... it is still the same thing because of the jealousy factor.
So you mean they will be just married but not together in any form?
You should explain it better then, because your comments so far hinted at ntr (them having sex...).
so it will have cuck shit, any LI (love interest) fucking some other dude is ntr in my book, it doesn't matter the technicality that they are a couple, you can easily make them have a sexless marriage.
Was kinda interested to see if this game was worth adding to my list but it seems like it won't truly be safe from your own words.
A shame because I did like the models.
