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It's neat, I found the crumpling bushes and plants to be cool at first, but it started to get tedious after sometime. It might be better if it was just a single click to crumple.

I also thought the twist at the end was interesting, however, I feel like the ending just comes out of nowhere. It would have been nice if there were clues in regards to the twist, even if to just be able to look back and be able to see how it all fits together. As it is now everything you find is just a red herring, which makes the work feel a bit pointless in the end.

Thank you so much for the feedback! The crumpling mechanic definitely could use some tweaking to keep it from feeling tedious, I will look into improving it after the voting period :D

The ending is definitely what I am most displeased with myself. I was writing it in a big rush to not miss the deadline haha. And it's probably the first thing I will improve/change after the voting period.