The rocking back and forth between characters is uncomfortable. I'm feeling sea sick from it. I think a standard visual novel style would be better.
I like the humour and different characters. It's too short to have a strong opinion on so all the best on the development!
Thank you! Speaking of swithing between characters I started a poll here(it should be available for all), the idea is to have a feature to speed up the animation of switching characters, maybe that would make you less sea sick:)
Changing the speed won't help.