Did you aim for something?
If you aimed for disturbing, that's how I would describe it. The red text feels a bit out of place though.
Were this a painting I would not hang it into a lobby, unless I would have a spooky house. It is unsettling and I would imagine a crazy child character to draw like this in a video game. Especially because the red things look very much like a headshot and proably is meant to be one. Also, without further context, moon does has a quite literal connection to lunar and lunatic, in other words: crazyiness. An inmate in an asylum maybe.
So, no, I do not like that piece of art, nor that art style. If it fulfills a role, so be it. But there is no beauty there to appreciate for me to "like" the art. Abstract art is not something for me. Liking it or not, does not come into it.