well, it was short, but fun with enough built-up and surrounding atmosphere portrayal to be immersed in, the realistic dialogues, interactions and expressions were enjoyable and gave the characters life (loved 'em all) within the limited scope.
oh thank you so much! I'm always pleased when I can write the way people speak as more "natural" or "realistic" feeling, so I'm glad that was conveyed in this little entry of mine! Thank you for playing!