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Can I not reject Ashley early on? Im trying to go only for Jenn but it keeps forcing a scene with Ashley

Yeah, the Main Character dates Ashley and Leah automatically, as so much of the story revolves around them, like him living at their houses throughout the game. 

In future updates I plan to give each of the main girls their own endings early on around Episode 3 to make it possible to choose them and avoid dating the others.

*Decides to date the goth girl and the pink haired stripper*

*realizes they only seem to be options in the broken watch ending*

*is now sad pupper*

If you're a Lydia fan, you're going to like the next update!

I'm such a Lydia fan that I didn't remember that was even her name! (although i havnt played the game in several weeks and have played 3,476 other AVN's since then (jk jk)

Seriously though, I do have a preference for dark haired girls. Redheads just seem so cliche most of the time....

That said, i love your work so far.  It may not be entirely flowing due to the occasional story -glitch (seems to be a result of someone going back to add more branching  after having already written sections of it) ---  But thats to be expected in any WIP. 

Having fun! Enjoying it so far, although I have to wait until you complete 16 i think --- or is that fifteen? *is now confusing himself*

I'm playing the free version, as i take care of my Grandma and dont actually have a paycheck.... So whatever version is next is ... two? updates away for me. I think.

Glad you're enjoying it!
And yeah, most of the inconsistencies are due to adding more paths/options over time, and as much playtesting as I do, there are always more to find, so I always appreciate people reporting them.

Working on a Multi-Path story myself - although seeing as im on a laptop its all text only right now - cant afford 70 dollars for HS2 and my laptop wouldnt run it in the first place.... So I use twine.


Point being, keep track of all the paths and lines and coding and variables can be a bit taxing - especially in a harem game.


Anyways, I plan on doing a fresh playthrough over all the paths over the next week - I'll track all of the glitches in a text document.


Is there a specific place for me to send it when i get done?


(And obviously - I don't expect to see everything fixed as soon as you get a list. I appreciate what you are doing and understand the strain it can put on a person. It would only be a roadmap for you to use if you wanted to . No expectations or pressure - because hell, you're doing great! Better then I would, to be honest...

I would probably suck at rendering, as my forte is writing....)


ANYWAYS ... i digress.... Hope you have a good day! Take care of yourself!

That's where I'm at, I love the writing process but always end up behind with visuals, which is why I've been working on converting a few of my stories into Twine games as well. 

Sure, you can send me the document at expandinguniversegames@gmail.com 

Thanks!

If you need any twine advice let me know! I may be just starting out, but I still seem to know a few tricks! 

Depending on the version of it being used of course....

I'll get that  document sent to you in .... *does mental math*  .... a week or so....

Take care! *poofs for now*