It really means a lot to hear you liked this, being such an amazing writer yourself! This game came about half because I had a concept and a character design in mind, and half because I've always been terrible at constructing a short, satisfying narrative (often going more for longer and expansive casts like in DDD) so this was a way for me to challenge myself and try to make something compact, with fewer sprites and assets. I'm very glad it worked for the most part!
And thank you for pointing out those errors, I always fail at catching all of them. And yes, I wanted to write it from the POV of Ferida because I thought it was necessary for the exposition to work well, and also because I find it funny when people are forcibly brought into other people's couple problems.
Thank you so much for playing and commenting!!