This is excellent writing. I recently became interested in creating text-based adventures with Inky, but I'm far from this level. No wonder this adventure is having success. I wonder which engine was used to make it.
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Ren'Py is more for visual novels. If you're just doing regular text-based stories, I'd recommend sticking with Twine. You can do normal text-only stories in Ren'py, especially with NVL-Mode, but Twine is lighter and can be simpler to learn for people starting out with the programming side of things.