Silly game but also interesting to see the jump from being initially text-based. It feels unfinished and could use some further refinement.
Things I liked:
- The goofy tone of the writing and the humor
- The flirt button
Things which need improvement:
- Many mechanical aspects of the game are unclear. For example: How do I control things? What can I interact with or not? When can I interact with things?
- Spelling and grammar issues. The game has a rough feeling with all the memes and mismatching visual language (see below), so there's an argument to be made about how deliberate these mistakes are, but it's still unclear.
- Inconsistent visual language. There's a real mix of styles on display here for such a short experience. Try working with a more deliberate choice that unifies things.
- Bugs. There's at least one bug which cut the game short for me (when I selected the option to check things out, nothing happened.