This is pretty good already! Even if there's stuff missing, I liked the ladies flirting and the story so far (and the way it's presented through the bar visitations). I also really like the character designs, there's a lot of personality that comes through just from that.
If there's one advice I'd give, it's to change the default speed of the text, since some players might not know how to change it, and maybe give each character a different name color. But other than that, I enjoyed it a lot so far!