An enjoyable read! I haven't seen many VNs made in RPGmaker, so that was interesting to experience. The character designs are all lovely, and I enjoyed their personalities as well! Uncle Vern is def my favorite! The background having a diorama of the scene is such a clever idea, and I loved when it matched with the monologue, like with the black tile in the shop, really nice attention to detail!
The only thing that was a little strange is that the game didn't have an ending, like a fade to black, or exit to title screen or something like that. It just stops giving any more dialogue, which was a little odd.
Other than that though, I liked it a lot, would love to see what else you work on in the future! <3