Really cool concept and execution. The typing sounds gives a nice touch to the text. There was a very small issue tho, on the third dream, after interacting with the cake, the game tells me that it was added to my inventory, but it never was, and I tried it more than once, I believe that this prevented me from getting the 8th mirror shard (because I interacted with everything that I could on the game), and had to use a different shard to leave the dream. Gladly this just doesn't really change the experience, it's just a minor detail that I wanted to make you aware of. Anyway, like I said, great stuff! You stuff is consistently good, and like I mentioned on the comment I left on your other game (The Big Catch), feel free to reach me in case you ever feel like working together for a future game jam.
Hi! Thanks for the feedback and kind words :) Good catch with the cake, that does need to be fixed. The 8th mirror shard is actually obtained another way, although yeah it could be a bit more intuitive since it’s easy to miss. I’m not currently looking for people to work with (maybe in the future), but I would love to see your work, if you have a twitter page or something like that?
https://kuroyama.portfoliobox.net/portfolio
this is my portfolio, there are some heavily outdated pieces in there, but you can have a general idea of my work. In case you wanna talk some more about it, feel free to reach me on discord, it's geeedorah (legacy username is geeedorah#6140)