Thank you again for downloading the demo (and loving baby Toshio!) <3
If you are loving tsun characters, I think Haru or Ikki might be good bachelors too~
As for the mistakes, I'll check it again and will do beta testing once the game is fully done, to be sure that all is okay. English isn't my native language, but I have a proofreader/editor with me, to prevent bad/clumsy sentences and all, so hopefully it will be better in the final version! (> o <)
Thank you again for your kind comment and your feedback, I'm so happy you love the game so far!