I find that name strange. Never saw it spelled that way in English literature, but you can keep it, if you want. Some other ideas from ChatGPT:
Also you use chimerae instead of manticore in this area.
I wasn't sure before, but in the teleporter endings you spell "Lamias", they should not be capitalized.
When talking to Darania, a textbox with Melia appears that doesn't fit in the conversation flow.
Pretty sure the effect is 2500 SP.





I noticed an inconsistency. You can have Serina state that 6 world fragments are all you can get, despite her claiming with just 5 world fragments that she does only know of 5 world fragments. And if you go for the good ending with 6 world fragments, she doesn't complain about Nana not using all 6. Also no one ever wonders, why there are 6 receptacles.


Missed to screenshot, but Luca says "This are the leftovers" instead "These are the leftovers".

7th Tail does not affect Rabbit's nor Xia's normal skills.



Didn't know that this is her name. Or this. Check all her textboxes.



Name also wrong here.



How did Nana get back to the lost continent?






Did Nana keep her shapeshifting powers? Or remained she stuck as Ascended Kitsune/whatever form she had?