I think this game is really nice to play and all the different options were very entertaining. I do think you could benefit from a good background track, just something simple to go along with the concept of the game.
I also think some of the paragraphs were hard to read because they were in a solid block of text, just adding more line breaks would help with that if you wanted.
There were a few coding errors that popped up when I was playing, specifically one when I encountered the cat in the alley, one when I went to Manchester Boulevard, and one after the stick sword option when I entered the playground. I have screenshots if you need them!
The game was very enjoyable despite those small things, especially the character interactions, like with the coffee shop employees.