Enjoying the vn thus far, really like the narrative style and of course the content . Have noticed some redundancy in descriptions though. For example, the first paragraph. You don't need to mention it's the cabin of the car, since you already mentioned it was a car engine, just small things like that, but they can add up
Thanks for the catch! I try my best, but some redundancies are bound to slip in, hah.
The writing certainly smoothes our later. The prologue is the roughest part of this story. I had never written in extended first person before, and the VN format was completely new to me.
Thanks for still giving it a chance, though ~
Oh! And if you find more mistakes, feel free to message me privately on Itch or Twitter to let me know! I'd love to fix them.