This is an adventure with original aspects, such as approaching descriptions in prose instead of the typical bulletpoint lists, and a map of caves in an atypical side view, evoking sidescroller video games, nice touch!
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i'll be honest, the mine almost didn't get a sketch. it's almost only there because coming out of the mine introduces so many factions immediately. even if they walk away they'll be walking past guards pushing around woodsmen, settlers harassed by a giant boar, some fancy ship that wasn't there before, etc. anything in the sandbox is plot after that launch.
thanks for the feedback!