Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
Tags
(+1)

oh my dude my guy my dude i love love love chemistry with all my heart. i took ap chem as a junior in 2018, and now i'm a chem major shooting to become an ap chem teacher someday, and i have entrenched so much of chem into my daily life you have no idea. i've tutored many, many peers and underclassmen in chem since my junior year, written and graded tests and homework in my senior year, and gotten myself into a chem class with only one other first year now in college. honestly there were times where doing and practicing chemistry literally kept me alive.

that being said i feel like this should come as no surprise that i didn't come here for the romancing, but the chemistry itself lol. however, despite finding it difficult to make eye contact with the drawings at times, i was still drawn in by the characters. i really appreciate the fact that despite it being an early demo, all the characters have solid visuals and personalities. they're also all super adorable and i love them hehehe

in terms of chem, i went for the stoich lesson because i love stoichiometry. i liked the beef stew analogy; it had this very homey feeling to it compared to the hamburgers/hot dogs analogy i usually hear for the topic. by that point in their teaching, however, there should be the phases listed after all the components in a balanced equation, regardless of whether it's supposed to be baby review or not. i'm pretty sure ap knocks off credit if you don't *finger guns* (don't quote me on that tho). sometimes answers were really similar numerically, and it made me kinda nervous because i noticed there were rounding differences in the example and so i wasn't sure which to trust. i noticed you tend to round early, which definitely accounts for the differences (and makes ap mad), so when polishing up the game (definitely not now while you're still getting the core down; don't mind my nitpicking for now lol) i would recommend cleaning that up a bit. 

i really liked that you warned at the start of the game to have your own periodic table because you honestly could've just given us all the relevant numbers and stuff, but that's just not realistic, and i like the idea of an added challenge to people less initiated with chemistry. 

realistically, i think that if she worked hard at it, marina could pass the ap. probably not with flying colors because i genuinely think mr. kagaku is way too soft on all of them. his main motivating factor seems to be via affection, and he's kind about their grades, but really effective teaching needs an equal mix of affection and *fear* from students. plus, april is far too late for the class to be primarily lectures imo. april is time for grinding for the ap, which is just lots of tests and mock exams and quizzes. (grading around this time is fun fun fun y'know lol). then again, that would probably shoot marina's stress up to 99 in a week and it wouldn't really run as well with the spirit of the game so really it's fine

honestly i had so much fun playing this!!! i was a bit sad that none of the lectures after the first one were available, so i just stopped going to the after school lectures after that. the music was adorable and i love love loved all of it!!! also a minor detail, but making the cursor into an erlenmeyer was absolutely adorable. the character relationships were a ton of fun!!! kinda sad that i'm now caught up :C

i guess to sum up this is fun and i really really enjoyed the demo!!!! keep up the good work!!!!! C:

OH MYY~ haha thank you so much for your comment and for playing through the demo! i appreciate and am blown away by your passion! it's been a LOOOONG time since i've taken a chemistry course, so the details like adding the phase states and what not have slipped my mind (oops haha). i'll keep this in mind for the future and edit that in for future lectures as well! i also don't mind your nitpicking! i welcome it and appreciate it! not a lot of people like chemistry, so it's nice to have someone so passionate about the subject enough to help me with the details xDD

i'm glad you liked the beef stew analogy! that's... actually how i learned it in high school LMAO so all the credit there goes to my high school chemistry teachers. my goal with the game was and is to make studying chemistry somewhat enjoyable and interesting, so i'm glad you're engaged with it so far! part of learning chemistry is learning how to navigate the periodic table and use your calculator, so there's no way i'm gonna take that experience away xDD

i agree with you! if marina puts in the time, she'd definitely be able to pass! and mr. k does seem kind of soft hahaa. he's relatively new at teaching, and i think new teachers would realistically struggle to find a balance between being strict and being friendly with students. i remember in high school, our teachers set up review sessions that were lecture style, but they also had a bunch of review packets where we did the questions and they went through the answers and whatnot.

for me, since i've been going back through old notes and watching khan academy videos to relearn chemistry, writing the lectures takes the most time, but it's relatively the easiest thing to add to the game. that's why i'm planning to implement them last. right now i'm planning to add each route one by one and im starting with sidney! i don't plan to release the full game until all routes are implemented and all chemistry mishaps and grammar mistakes are fixed and polished! to do that, i'll likely ask for volunteers who'd like to test the final version of the game before i release it. i hope you'll look forward to that and the final release!

i'm super happy and glad that you like the game! it's kinda quirky and unique in the visual novel market haha, so when i receive feedback like this, it warms my heart. C:

i'll do my best to make this as close to a chemistry class experience as possible, but i'd also like to make the questions simple and accessible to those who have not taken the advanced placement course. thus, i plan for all the quizzes and trivia to be general chemistry level and nothing *too* impossibly difficult (i remember some ridiculous and traumatizing questions from my time haha...)

thank you again so much! it means a lot, truly!